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haruka and michiru not getting along lol
And Franken-daddy loses big points for not at least attempting the Eiffel Tower Tour.
Well, most of them, anyway. [link="[link]"]
Incidentally, I find it odd that two Japanese people could speak English so well at length. Though I can hardly fault you for
But I don't really want to obsess over that. I really enjoy what you've written here, and this was only just a minor note here. I was just trying to imagine how the strip would sound and something just felt a little off.
BTW, while I was thinking about this language thing, I noticed that Michiru hasn't really said anything yet (other than a person's name, which is the same in any language), and I wonder if maybe she's one of those "children should be seen and not heard" types. That makes sense, given her proper demeanor.
If that's true, then perhaps there's more to her death glare than simple food loss - I wonder if maybe there's some repressed frustration or something. In a sense, she actually reminds me of a young Franziska von Karma - minus the whip of course.
The more I think about this, the more I want to learn about this situation from Michiru's point of view.